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Tuesday, 27 November 2018

The gumboot throwing world wide competition!

This week we were writing a made up story about a gumboot throwing competition and here is mine:
Hope you enjoy!

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5 comments:

  1. Shanaya3 December 2018 at 14:01

    hi amelia
    I like the way you said it was burning hot as my face was sweating.
    next time could you describe the gumboot.
    This reminds me of rugby.

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    1. amelia19 December 2018 at 13:30

      thanks for your comment Shanaya,
      I think I should have described the boot so thanks for the tip!
      :)

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  2. Canada3 December 2018 at 14:17

    I like the way you said at the start that they were sweating because it means what you are felling and how hot it is

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  3. Canada3 December 2018 at 14:18

    HAPPY B-DAY Amelia

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    1. amelia19 December 2018 at 13:32

      Thanks for your 2 comments Canada but next time just put the first comment in not the second comment because that isn't based on my work.
      :)

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