This week in writing we had to write an acrostic poem or a story about the A & P Show.
I wrote both and here is my poem. I called it 'Baby Goats'.
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Amelia, It's meh Gloria (obviously)
ReplyDeleteI really liked you poem because it had rhymes, some people don't even try to make it rhyme so it ends up kinda boring so well done!I think you should write on the title Baby Goats Poem but you don't have too. this reminds me of when I wrote about the A&P show can you go check it out?