This week and last week we had to write a narrative (a made up story) that had a seen in it from a picture that we got showed. The story was called 'Can He Save Her.' Today we had to stop where we were and write a conclusion. Here is my conclusion. I hope you like it and give some helpful comments!
Wednesday, 3 July 2019
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Hi Amelia im Mitchell
ReplyDeleteI like the way you did the background and were spuder man and the villain and ended up.
next time you could put the hole story together.
I have done something like that can you please go on look on my blog.
Hi Mitchell,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Mitchell. I had to make the ending before I had finished the story sorry but I will certainly put everything on together once I have finished it!
I will check out your blog for sure!
:)