This week in writing we had to write persuasive writing about if we should animals for work or not. Here is my persuasive writing:
Please comment and tell me if you think it is okay to use animals for work!
Tuesday, 30 July 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hi Amelia im Peter.
ReplyDeleteI just want to say how good this is and I recon you could make the background a little darker cause at the front I can't really read it. good job with the writing and it is a BRILLIANT story
from Peter
Oops I have fixed this. I just want to say how good this is because the paragraphs have detail in them. I reckon you could make the background a little darker because at the front I can't read it. Good job with the writing. This is a BRILLIANT story.
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