This week and last week the News Reporters (my reading group) joined the What do you mean reading group and we were reading the prince and the albatross egg. Our task was to write a short summary about the text so here is mine I hope you enjoy reading it!
This week we are reading The Prince and the Albatross egg.
It is about children from Dunedin and Wellington getting together to learn how to use the TV to contact each other so that they can share their Ideas. Prince Charles came to see them and ask them questions about their topic for their project. He asked a few questions about the royal albatross because that was the kids topic and he wanted to know a little bit more about albatrosses. Then there was a weird question from the prince but he said it only because he didn’t know how protected they are in New Zealand and only one person new the answer but they didn’t say a word.
The prince soon left and waved goodbye then he was gone.
If you could please comment on my work I would love that, and please give me feedback on if I have told what you think are the main points and not to much of things that aren't main points.
Hi Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI'm Tasharn from Hornby Primary School.
I like the part were you wrote what you are doing in the title.Did you think about previewing your blog post before you post it because your writing is going off the page and it is really hard to read.Next time you could try and write in a bigger font or make you word bigger. Other than that you did great.
Thank you Tasharn for your comment.
ReplyDeleteI will make the writing bigger next time so you could read it if I accidentally make my writing go off the page. I was wondering if you thought I kept my summary on just the main points because that is what I've been pushing on?
- Amelia