This week and last week my reading group joined the What do you mean reading group. We were reading The Prince and The Albatross Egg. Our task was to write a short summary and then we chose some one to give feedback on. I chose my friend Isla.
This is what I said when I gave feedback:
I really like the way you kept the main parts in you summary.
Isla next time you write a summary try to remember where your a's and an's go.
Isla you have used your correct speech marks in one place but not the other, for a title you wouldn’t use “ “ you would use ‘ ‘ and also remember for a question you need to use a ? at the end.
Remember that the teachers didn’t say out loud that you would never eat a albatross egg.
Please give me feedback on if I kept my comments positive!
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