| This is my poster of private information. I did it to show people and make them understand what private information was. It helps reminded everyone what private information is. I hope it helps you! |
Wednesday, 20 June 2018
Private information.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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dear amelia
ReplyDeleteI like your poster
next time can you had some more pictures of private stuff.
Thank you amber and I will do that next time. That really helps me when you give me back feedback thank you.
DeleteI like the why you set your private information up and the pitchers because it shows what it is.
ReplyDeleteIs this helpful or do you feel I should say more?
Thank you Tk for commenting on my work. I think that you wrote a fine amount on the comment. Maybe next time you comment you make sure that the spelling is correct. Thank you.
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ReplyDeleteI like the way u set the private information
Deleteup and next time u should make the pictures bigger
To Amelia
ReplyDeleteI like the way you set up the private information. Now could you put more information about private and what you can share on the web.
Is this helpful or do you want me to tell you more.
Mitchell,
DeleteThank you for your commenting on my work. I think that you are right that I should have put up more information and less pictures. I think you wrote an amazing amount of words because you helped me make my next one better.
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ReplyDeleteHi Amelia I like your private information poster maybe next time could you add a little more posters. Is this helpful or do you want me to tell you more.
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Thank you Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI don't really think I should add in more pictures, because I thought I should put in a bit more information really. But thank you for your comment.
- Amelia
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Tiana and I go to Hornby primary school I have followed your blog because you seem like a nice person to me private information is something you should never tell a stranger.
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