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Friday, 15 June 2018

Making poems

This is my work making poems. This is the finished project but we did have a hole table for planing.
I hope you enjoy!


Now write your poem here

PIE
He is a kind gentle animated cartoon character with a big red smile,
His eyes are black and cold as if all the happiness had gone from the world but he is still a nice little boy,
Pie and more pie is what his breath smells like,
He walks slowly with his body as a giant mixed berry pie with black arms and legs,
He wears a tight blue jeans, a black coat full of pies, and a bright blue tie,

His voice is soft gentle and very very deep.

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