Giving friendly feedback!

This week and last week my reading group joined the What do you mean reading group. We were reading The Prince and The Albatross Egg. Our task was to write a short summary and then we chose some one to give feedback on. I chose my friend Isla.

This is what I said when I gave feedback:

I really like the way you kept the main parts in you summary.

Isla next time you write a summary try to remember where your a's and an's go.

Isla you have used your correct speech marks in one place but not the other, for a title you wouldn’t use “  “ you would use ‘  ‘ and also remember for a question you need to use a ? at the end.

Remember that the teachers didn’t say out loud that you would never eat a albatross egg.

Please give me feedback on if I kept my comments positive!

Summary on The Prince and The Albatross Egg

This week and last week the News Reporters (my reading group) joined the What do you mean reading group and we were reading the prince and the albatross egg. Our task was to write a short summary about the text so here is mine I hope you enjoy reading it!

This week we are reading The Prince and the Albatross egg.

It is about children from Dunedin and Wellington getting together to learn how to use the TV to contact each other so that they can share their Ideas. Prince Charles came to see them and ask them questions about their topic for their project. He asked a few questions about the royal albatross because that was the kids topic and he wanted to know a little bit more about albatrosses. Then there was a weird question from the prince but he said it only because he didn’t know how protected they are in New Zealand and only one person new the answer but they didn’t say a word.

The prince soon left and waved goodbye then he was gone.

If you could please comment on my work I would love that, and please give me feedback on if I have told what you think are the main points and not to much of things that aren't main points.

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My name is Amelia. 

I am a student at Wigram Primary School. I love to read lots of books at my house and in my spare time I love writing and painting. I love my blue bike and I always go for bike rides. I also go on my trampoline constantly.

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